For my essay I chose to write about was character development and how certain characters in the book that have influenced Esperanza. My peer review score was 60/100 after revising it greatly my final grade was 95/100. While writing this essay I feel as if I have improved my consistency while writing and sticking to one main topic while giving evidence to support my point. I need to improve upon my grammar and wording sentences so they make sense. Overall I feel as if I did very well on this essay, I worked hard and I made sure I did my best.